3. On the blog (optional extra credit): Write about someone you admire. Tell why you admire them (at least 200 words).
My admire person is Angelina Jolie. She is funny. She dedicates to other people true. Some people might say that she is kind person. I see that she use to her celebirty for the betterment of others in ways that are more than superficial. Madonna and others she has worked hard and has spent days at a time like afganistan. She has given without condition and has given a home to children that otherwise would not have another chance. So I admire her as a true humanitarian. If fame follows her it is truely because we cannot get enough of her and not because she invites it. I want to every entertainer help to poor people.
It's very interesting that you admire actress. I got a new recognition about her because of your writing. It's good but I'll give you some advice. There are grammatical errors such as tense. If you want to tell about her past, you need to write in past sentence. I also want to advice about another rule. You should not use 'But' in front of the sentence. Except these, I think your writing is quite good. :-)
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